PRELUDES AND FANFARE:
(music - Storms in Africa II/Enya - 02:59 "marquee")
(music - Watermark/Enya - 02:24 "admissions")
(music - Cursum Perficio/Enya - 04:06 "reception")
(music - The Longships/Enya - 03:36 "introduction")
(music - Discovery/Tesh - 04:01 "fanfare")
SUPERIMPOSE FOREWORD water-blue on black:
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| Accurate portrayal being paramount to good story telling, the reasonable attempts have been made to secure the plausible redaction of Scripture: Correlations of source text and archaeological dating leave tentative deductions; We've chosen the better fit in each instance. Contemporary dangers in the region render impracticable to arrive at other conclusion. - the Trustee for project 'lambhorn'
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FADE IN:
EXT. EAST OCEAN HORIZON - STARS RISING FAST - PREDAWN CLEAR
(00:00 strings - China Roses/Enya)
(00:06 whistle)
SUPERIMPOSE TITLE CREDITS progressive indigo…red…orange:
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| The Son Dey School of Christ Science
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| project 'lambhorn'
-presents-
a Wision--Sesquatercet USA production
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(00:28 "moonlight")
MOON RISES;
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| screenplay by Mr. Raymond Kenneth Petry Trustee-Director for project 'lambhorn'
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(00:32 "comet")
TAILED-COMET RISES;
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| inferred and translated in American English
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(00:35 "tears")
Horizon-radiant METEORS STREAK-BURST; scintillating text:
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(00:41 +harpsichord)
MORNING HORIZON PEEKS rich orange beneath purple:
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(00:44 "break of morning")
HORIZON ENLARGES … to SUN-YELLOW half-banner on pink sky:
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| SCIENCE AND DOCUDRAMA REDACTED OF GENESIS 1-3
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(00:54 "cloud in crimson")
SKY BRIGHTENS BLUE, CRIMSON CLOUDS; beach trees, DAWN;
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| Stereo'eyes'ed - PG-17 Ultra Vivid
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(01:05 ooh, strings lull)
DOUBLE-IMAGE: "ARCHAEODUS" OUTER EXPANDS, OBLITERATING RED except the ocean horizon steams and lowers to Off-Screen.
(01:15)
MULTIPLE-IMAGES: Small white "ARCHAEODUS" INNER IGNITES and expands to midsize … Holds: A tiny blue-white "ARCHAEODUS" CORE IGNITES in blooming fiery brilliance (a giant pre-nova star nuclear-fusion-burning its silicon to iron within its oxygen…neon…carbon fusion layers, and helium and hydrogen fusion layers billowing its giant red outer photosphere) …
(01:29 -stop before voice-)
A mere stellar day contemplation to go …
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EXT. ECLIPTIC PLANE - RED GIANT - STARRY COSMOS (SEQUENCE)
(00:00 string, cry - I Will Ease the Pain…/Marquisard)
At 50 AU deep center sits bright red giant sun Sirius C.
(00:12 piano)
Hundreds of distant rocket EXHAUST TRAILS IGNITE, escaping its imminent demise (nearer seen first at light speed).
(00:26 rhythm clacks)
Sync. NEUTRINO RATCHET-BURSTS SEE-HEAR-FEEL, EVERYWHERE 4 cps 10 sec. diminishing…
(00:33 +voice)
A ROCKET APPROACHES: a gigantic 10 mi.-long pavis-sheathed tri-fuselage space-city-ship, with cuneiform name PHNX …
LUMBERING-BY, space-DUST FLASH-STREAKS its sides … passes …
Nuclear-power-driven … three raspy tenuous exhaust trails …
(00:~~)
(POV WITH) Rocket approaching a giant GAS PLANET …
(01:02 sticks, contemplative arguing chant)
CHASE: Rocket in rapid dive … PASSING OVER …
(01:17 zoom, voice reemphasizes)
NUCLEAR-DRIVE BURST PULLS IT AHEAD under rings and moons …
(01:31 huff exertion)
And hyperbolically gradually upward … for deep space …
(POV) Rocket: Looking back down at the yet-passing planet …
(01:45 rhythm, voice)
Receding very-rapidly … till behind all,--
A BLUE-WHITE NOVA, rapidly beginning, captures the center.…
(02:~~)
(POV WITH) Rocket approaching a splendorous small red sun …
(02:15 drum chant contemplative arguing)
CHASE: Rocket in hyper dive … AEROGLOW … PASSING OVER …
(02:30 zoom, voice reemphasizes)
NUCLEAR-DRIVE BURST PULLS IT AHEAD over spicules, through flare-loops, the comae horde, and occasional dust strikes …
(02:44 huff exertion)
And hyperbolically gradually upward … for deep space … BRIGHTER AEROGLOW HUGGING its forward sides …
(POV) Rocket: Looking back down at the yet-passing sun …
(02:59 rhythm, voice)
Receding ultra-rapidly … but still, behind all, is--
The whitening-white Nova filling half the sky, enlarging …
(03:~~)
(POV WITH) Rocket racing for deep outer-space …
CHASE: Rocket … OPENING ITS PAVIS to the Nova, preceding …
(03:28 drum, chant, voice heightens)
FAINT CREAMY-WHITE NOVA WIND GLOW OVERTAKES everything …
The Rocket spot disappearing in the haze …
(03:52 fade)
BRIGHTEST STARS FADE LAST in the glowing hazy whiteout …
(03:55 -out-)
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EXT. DEEP SPACE, TRI-FUSELAGE ROCKET - SUPERNOVA EDGE
(00:00 windwhistle - Under the Sun/Marquisard)
Stars, a few comets, fill left; faint Nova-bloom pink-haze on the right lit by a 0.5 sec. PULSAR FLASHING FAR-RIGHT …
(00:06 cry)
ZOOM-IN … CENTER: Nova-plasma-wind wakes against the Rocket rear, its space-ram pavis fully expanded 10 mi. radius, its tri-fuselage open on 1 mi. pylons; as it creeps leftward …
(00:15 +drum tap)
Slowly rolling axially 5 min.-per [1 deg./sec.] …
(00:24 +voice)
DETAIL FORE TO AFT: its three featureless tube-cities …
(00:56 guitar)
Its Drives now Off; a SPACECRUISER parked in the rear …
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INT. SPACECRUISER - VARIOUS LIT
(NB. SPACER VOICES TIP-OF-MOUTH WHISPER-QUIET BASS-ALTO)
(01:01 talk)
COLLAGE:
PERSONNEL activities, maintenances; NAVIGATION DISPLAYS track deep space comets far ahead lit by the Nova wind: markings are high-tech cuneiform …
WATCHER ROOMS: Monitoring all other rooms, corridors …
A CORRIDOR as monitored (CONTINUOUS) … Personnel enter into
AN OBSERVATION DECK - SOCIAL LIT (AS CONTINUOUS)
(01:16 voice)
ZOOM SLOW THROUGH … PASSING BETWEEN: SENIOR PARENTS sitting vis-a-vis at a secluded table near an outer wall FLASHING
(01:30 cry, piano exult)
SPACE-WINDOW: The pinkish Nova-bloom flashing outside:
(01:38 cry)
Lit from its pulsar flashing in deep space, far behind.…
(01:44 -stop before voice-)
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INT. STUDY CUBICLE - FAINT RED LIT (8000 YEARS LATER)
(CU) A flat video wide-screen REFLECTION OF spacer boy ADAM AT 2 (REFL) watching AN ANIMATION of solar system planetary creation; Mr. GABRIEL (VO), small senior muscle, narrates:
SUPERIMPOSE:
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[GABE] (VO)
(reads aloud)
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Chapter One: Living Planet Genesis; Time-scale: Seventh-order, cycling.
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ANIMATED: Flattened pre-solar nebula glowing in Bode-bands; blazing planet-quadruplets, co-orbiting, coalesce to twins; a few asteroids collide, flashing light that echoes abroad;
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[GABE] (VO)
We begin at this condensed planet spinning through the dusty nebula orbiting its central sun not yet lit to star-brightness … Only the Spirit of God watches.
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ANIMATED: Dark spinning planet, continual meteor storm adds dim glow; occasional fireballs streak across;
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[GABE] (VO)
This planet has removed to an orbit far from its pair-mate and begun to cool in cloudy darkness … Rocks and dust still crash onto the planet.
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ANIMATED: Tempest winds scour boiling-water seas covering glimmering magma flows;
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[GABE] (VO)
Deep water covers its crusty lava and boils-away heat into scouring winds, high into its atmosphere … Lavas still glimmer below.
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ANIMATED: Red sky light blooms to a bright-dim day-cycle;
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[GABE] (VO)
As the faraway sun ignites to star fire, its suffuse light illumines the thinning nebula blanketing the spinning planet with its first day light … Lighter and darker are the first type of day; and God counts this improvement, Good.
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ANIMATED: Tempest-winds subside to a global rain storm beneath back-lit cloudy reddish haze mottling the sky;
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[GABE] (VO)
As the planet cools, its atmosphere slows to let vapor gather as clouds precipitating rain water, cleansing the air for vegetation to breathe … And God counts this, improvement, Good; This is the second day-type.
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ANIMATED: Magmas harden, crack, weathering into fine dusty soils, green vegetation proliferates, blackish in reddish-orange sky-glow;
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[GABE] (VO)
Cycles of sunlight, warmth, and wet and dry, accelerate the microscopic crumbling of hardened lava rock, to gravel, sand, dust, soil, clay, and dirty seawater,- greatly increasing its availability to microbiological slime and mold developments,- which also increase the crumbling. Larger vegetations luxuriate and the third day-type is dominated by sightless, greenish land-plants basking in the reddish-orange daylight, making the air good for animals and mankind.
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ANIMATED: Sky clears to day and night, to detect the sun's spot, moons; distant planets, colored stars at night: The mountains are patched with snow;
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[GABE] (VO)
While vegetation and tiny insects develop and flourish on the planet, in its air and its seas, the nebula blanketing the planet clarifies to let direct light show the spots of the sun and moon and other planets, and stars, in their colors.… Nights and winters and pole regions become colder; climates specialise. Larger plants, that grow fruits to nurture their own seeds, develop … On this fourth type of day the point of seeing and science becomes good.
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ANIMATED: Fish swimming, jumping … then add fowl flying;
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[GABE] (VO)
As animals develop and specie-fy in the buoyant water seas, they follow the changing seasonal direction and currents flowing around the planet: These are the first fish; And from these, lighter-weight birds develop flying by flapping the less-buoyant air … And day-type Five, is good.
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ANIMATED: Cattle, sheep, roaming, lion resting, aboriginal idyllic mankind walking;
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[GABE] (VO)
Land-creatures, including mankind, dominate the planet and its seas in day-type Six. This is the finale of known life-soul manifestations on living planets, but mankind needs a further distinction from the animal creatures.…
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ADD TRANSLUCENT SPOT-OVERLAY of [Gabe] face:
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[GABE]
We put aside this idyllic scenery to understand generic man and his ascendency over all the planet and its seas and skies and outer space around: It is also to be seen and counted, Good, and felt constantly: It is the altitude, the orbit, the vantage of thought watching calmly confidently with God: It restfully sees all good unfolded undiminished before it contemplates point, line, place.… This elevation of authority brings us to eye our present day-type, the Seventh, and its ultimate conclusion in your responsibilities here and wherever you count good.…
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ADD TRANSLUCENT SPOT-OVERLAYS of individual [STUDENTS] faces at 2-4 years; Adam sees his own video-echo:
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[GABE]
Adam, you may ask a question.
[ADAM]+ADAM (REFL)
Can people go outside a planet? in their spacesuits?
[GABE]
Planets are bigger, so they don't have to; but they can.
[STUDENT#2]
Will we visit a planet to see these development phases?
[GABE]
Most planets are finished;- We will visit a sixth-day planet.
[STUDENT#3]
What is soil like? Do we have any in the laboratory stores?
[GABE]
Soil is like your toy-modeling clay.
[STUDENT#4]
What do planet-people do during the nighttime of day?
[GABE]
The same as you do when you turn-off the lights, and sleep.
[STUDENT#5]
Why don't we have animals in our spacecruiser?
[GABE]
Animal communities do not fit in spacecruisers; And do not need to: They will already be on any planet we will visit.
[STUDENT#6]
How many planets are there orbiting a sun?
[GABE]
Each sun may have several pairs of planets, and some, smaller suns.
[STUDENT#7]
Are all day-type-six planets inhabited by men?
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PULL-BACK TO (MCU) real Adam in his plush study-cubicle:
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[GABE]
One or two, sometimes three planets at each sun, are just right for us.
ADAM+[ADAM]
Can planet-people see us? Where are they going?
[GABE]
Only when we come near or visit them: Then they follow us.
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INT. SPACER BOY CHILD'S BEDROOM - LOW LIT
ROOM LIGHT AUTO-DIMS while Mommy TFNI, small pretty senior, tucks-in Adam; exotic stuffed animal-shape toys abound.
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TFNI
And what was the inspiring class discussion today?
ADAM
We learned about seven day-types phases in living-planet genesis.
TFNI
Can you name the seven phases?
ADAM
The first is after the planet already exists inside a nebula.
TFNI
And what do you know about such a planet?
ADAM
It's round, and it spins, and it's dark but also really hot and messy.
TFNI
And what happens to that planet? Do you remember?
ADAM
The first phase is where the light makes a type of day and night.
TFNI
And where does the light originate? Is it on the planet somewhere?
ADAM
It is sunlight and its nebula wears thin and lets the sunlight through.
TFNI
And then what? What does light do?
ADAM
Mommy? What is a nebula blanket?- It's very dusty.
TFNI
And that is all that it is: dust floating uncollected about the sun.
ADAM
How does it keep the planet warm?
TFNI
The dust catches sunlight and heat, and gets warm itself; but darkly.
ADAM
There must be a lot of dust to keep a whole planet warm.
TFNI
Yes, a very lot: enough to make the sun and planets first,- and more.
ADAM
Then, the planet gets quiet and the wind turns into clouds and rain.… (yawns)
TFNI
And that is the second type of day? What is the next phase?
ADAM
Yes; Then the seas and lands cool, and make soil, and grow plants.
TFNI
Can you grow plants without soil?
ADAM
We have the hydroponic flowers; but they need nutrients.…
TFNI
And what happens when the planet is full of plants?
ADAM
The plants make air and grow fruits and the sea animals become fish and birds when they follow the moon and stars. There are land-creatures too and mankind. Mr. Gabriel said we will visit a sixth-day planet … but, Mommy, How do animals get to a planet?
TFNI
The Life-Principle we call, God, forms its manifestation everywhere in concert harmony:- All things reflect Life, together and diversely.
ADAM
And then God approves, and gives us things to do and learn.…
TFNI
Yes, And that's the seventh phase to think about.… Good night, dear one. (kiss)
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(00:00 ukelele - Isle of Her/Marquisard)
TfNi finishes hug-and-kisses with Adam, and exits.
ROOM LIGHT DARKENS, leaving status-control-panel-lights ….
ADJOINING ROOM - WARM LIT (CONTINUOUS)
(00:17 +voice)
DOOR CLOSES: TfNi exits the bedroom … and welcomes-embraces her princelike-twin TEFEN-RA in a hug turning together:
FULL-TURN on spacer room possessions around them ….
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EXT. SPACE - OUR KNOWN STARS - PULSAR AT STELLAR DISTANCE
(00:48 4 sec.)
A quick review of their now-remote pulsar and pole jets so distant that the sky is clear but for myriads of stars ….
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INT. OBSERVATION DECK (8000 YEARS IBID) - SOCIAL LIT
ATEM-RA, TfNi's 200-year-older-twin father, withered small but handsome, sits drinking at the counter with Tefen-Ra;
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ATEM-RA
(cheers) But, I'm-- Admiral Poop-or-dinkle, of this million-year boat … And I'm twice as old as you are …
TEFEN-RA
(looks in Ra's drink) What did you put in, that drink?
ATEM-RA
(looks in it) The usual Zirconium-96 nuclear poo.
TEFEN-RA
You mean,- Pie?
ATEM-RA
Poo … is present-perfect, Pie:-- I pie, I pied,- I … Have, Poo.
TEFEN-RA
(a beat) Sounds safe-enough, until you plug it into your deuteron accelerator … (looks to Ra's face) How do you know that you're twice as old as I am?- The nav-computer resets every time a gamma-burster zaps the local galactic arm …
ATEM-RA
Wait till we find a livable planet Earth,- and I'll prove it to you.
TEFEN-RA
(sips-puzzles a beat) How is a planet going to help you?
ATEM-RA
Planets rotate with long periods,- And around planets there are moons and other planets,- to count time.
TEFEN-RA
Oh … But, How is that going to tell you how old you are now …?
ATEM-RA
(sips: bubbles into his) Just you wait:- I'll show you.…
TEFEN-RA
(shrugs) I, suppose I've waited long-enough to find-out how old I am … I can wait a little longer ….
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INT. CONTROL-ROOM - NORMAL OPERATION LIT
(00:52 +choral)
WALL DISPLAYS: Ship-diagrams; Status on chrysalis modules, 2 under reconstruction; Telescopic planets; OFFICER-CREW computes navigations for swing-deceleration at the Pluton star-point, and Jupiter, and our moon, to arrive at Earth.
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INT. WHITE SUIT-UP-ROOM, REBEL VESSEL - BRIGHT LIT
(NB. TECHNICIAN VOICES MAN-NORMAL)
(01:09 voice)
AT THE PROBE PORTAL: White-suit ASSISTANTS help 6 assault-team CROAKERS suit-up breathing heavy green-gas: umbilical oxygenator connection, headgear, helmet, weapon, equipment.
A Croaker joker geysers-up heavy green-gas. Coughs. grins.
His Assistant refits his green-gas lung-loading tube.
(01:44 +choral)
Croakers and Assistants enter the Probe Portal to a dark …
INT. CROAKER-MANNED PROBE - DARK (CONTINUOUS)
(02:02 ukelele)
TECHNICIANS adjust lit control-panels; Assistants web-strap Croakers into goo-beds stacked vertically, 4 on outer ring, 2 deeper mid-ring, around the hollow center-tip probe-exit.
(02:21 +phonemes)
Technicians, Assistants, exit as done ….
PORTAL HATCH SHUTS to--
(02:37 -stop before voice-)
DARK: Panel lights only, COUNTING TIME … to reconsider ….
CUT IN:
EXT. REBEL SPACE-CARRIER - PROBE DOCK - FAR BEYOND JUPITER
The tiny ASSAULT PROBE ready to go, still attached,
(00:00 clacks - Tuamotu/Marquisard)
BLOWS CLASPS,-- floating off …
VERNIERS-ACCELERATES, gliding directly away …
(00:03 huff)
TESTS ITS REACTION-VERNIERS: Spins left. Spins right. Spin-shifts through a figure-infinity (horizontal-8) …
(00:07 zoom+huffs)
(POV) LEADING-ZOOMING OUT … MAIN THRUST ON coming away from the carrier-ship … which is gigantic …
Three more tests again: spins and figures …
(00:21 glide)
And glides, coming …
(00:24 talk)
(SWING POV) And passes close by (CU) …
(00:38 voice)
MAIN-THRUST ACCELERATES,-- preceding down for Jupiter …
(00:50)
Space-city-ship appears rear-forward thrust-decelerating out from behind Jupiter … PROBE THRUST RE-AIMS for it …
(00:57 eee, voice eery whine)
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INT. SPACECRUISER - COMMAND CENTER - BATTLE-RED
(NB. DISPLAY VOICES SOFT BASS-ALTO)
Consoles, walls, voices, displays: WARNINGS, ALARMS;
(01:~~ builds)
Crew scrambles, weaponry, armory suits …
VOICE-DISPLAY: Progress diagrammed, Alerts flashing:
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| (prompt white) TRAJECTORY (flashing white) CONVERGENT (flashing yellow) NON BALLISTIC (countdown orange) ETA 121 seconds (flashing red) * EVASIVE *
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(01:19 talk "voyager")
INT. CONNECTING CORRIDORS
HOP-SCAN: Armoried Crew positioned, advised repositioning …
(01:32 voice)
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EXT. PROBE - NEARING JUPITER - ABOVE RINGS
DIVE-THRUST BLOOMS,-- leading a bit more …
Space-city-ship out from Jupiter, GYRATES; THRUSTS AGAIN …
(01:50 eee, voice)
CHASE: Probe down through Jupiter's asteroidal belt:
DUST BLAZE-STREAKS on forward shield;
(02:11 lull)
Probe SPIN-THRUST-JOCKIES, AVOIDING NUCLEAR FLARES from the city-ship, But takes VAPORIZING HITS OF LASER-FIRE-SWEEP …
(02:28 clack)
A RAILGUN-SHOT STRIKE FLARES on the Probe.
(02:32 clack)
A SECOND STRIKE FLARES.
(02:35 voices, double-clack)
A DOUBLE STRIKE FLARES.
(02:38 double-clack)
A SECOND DOUBLE STRIKE FLARES.
(02:41 triple-clack)
A TRIPLE STRIKE FLARES, on Probe converging rapidly …
(02:43 eee)
ITS FINAL-THRUST WILD-SPIRAL DIVE PRECEDING-IN …
A FULL BARRAGE BLAZE BATTERS the Probe …
(02:56)
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INT. PROBE - DARK WITH PANEL LIGHTS
BATTERING RESONATES …
Croakers await, set tight in their goo-beds …
(03:11 abrupt stop -reverb, fadeout-)
PROBE IMPALES: JERK-COMPRESSING, FRONT BURSTING OPEN TO light, debris splattering, venting … smoke wafting …
Croaker beds unclasp;-- They dodge through to the light;
Except the Croaker joker, expired, drops from his goo-bed.
INT. HALL BREACHED BY PROBE TIP - LIT (CONTINUOUS)
(NB. REBELS ABOARD GASED-VOICES KRYPTON-HEAVY DEEP BASS)
Last Croakers climb-through; 2 split away; some take off outer-helmets, spew-coughing heavy-settling green-gas …
LIGHTS FAIL TO EMERGENCY-RED …
A GROUP OF 4 arrives at a control-locked door:--
DEMOLITION sets thermite sticky-cord.
All hide behind paves or behind-behind …
DOOR BLASTS OPEN.
They rush into--
INT. WATCHER CONTROL-ROOM - DIM RED LIT (CONTINUOUS)
Large display screens, control panels: ship diagrams include chrysalides modules, maintenance status.
2 GUESS-EXPERTS manipulate WATCHER-VIEWS [halls, rooms, crew, personnel] … gaining experience …
Headgear their inter-communications …
[Advised Croakers crash halls; gunfire on a few crew]
[Tefen-Ra armed in armory suit walks a PERIPHERY corridor]
Croaker-DIRECTOR orders to confront: Inter-communications …
[Tefen-Ra flip-turns prone at their sound, FIRING SHRIEKS]
INT. CORRIDOR - PORTAL TO PERIPHERY - RED (CONTINUOUS)
Outside this Portal-hatch Croakers gunfire-in; two dying …
A Croaker gun-launches a grenade,-- BLASTING OPEN A HOLE in the floor and SHOVING EVERYONE BACK. They rush to close the hatch but OUT-WIND CATCHES AND SUCKS one through, into the periphery corridor … and out the hole after Tefen-Ra …
Hatch closed, they run the corridor … and into, through--
THE CHRYSALIS PODS ROOM: intelligent, dog-like humans …
INT. CHILDREN'S ROOM - RED
CHILDREN huddled with ADULTS, Adam most apart, whispering, hearing the FIREFIGHT APPROACHING outside the closed door.
EXT. - DARK; MULTI-RANDOM-DISTRACTION-PURPLE-POINT-STROBES
Firefight VOLLEYS EXCHANGE between corners and some prone …
(POV) RANGER-GOGGLED TfNi in armory suit, prone, forefront, FIRING SHRIEKS at a Croaker who leap-rolling to the closed door, erects, grins … gunfiring on it, sinking back, dead …
INT. - (SAME INSTANT)
SHOTS THROUGH THE DOOR-- RIP-UP THE FLOOR about Adam …
Momentarily the frightful firefight ceases.
Crew enter, reassure them; assist injured Adam.
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INT. COMMAND OFFICE - NORMAL LIT (MINUTES LATER)
Large Displays loop watcher-angles of the [Rebel invasion]; CMDR MICHAEL, muscular, Gabe, TfNi, THREE MORE, debrief:
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MIKE
Who are they? How did they know where to hit us? Where is their carrier? Why are they suicidal?
GABE
They may have suffered a revolt since our star went supernova: It's been eight millennia.…
-FOURTH-
Sir, They are in this sector here … (at Jupiter-Trojans map) They are not following us, -or were not,- but we won't know, until they break-out of ballistic trajectory:- if they're in tracking range.
GABE
Mike, They were approaching the children almost directly.
MIKE
We've had no contact in thousands of years. Why the children?
TFNI
Sir, From the watcher-control-room they could find empty corridors.
MIKE
Psychology? TfNi;- following a buffer-zone to the children?
-FIFTH-
Sir, Their mental tones were dark and mechanical: All kill.
MIKE
Kill in empty corridors? What is their target purpose?
GABE
I think they want the children:-- the threat of a future.
MIKE
But suicidal! Gabe, What chieftain risks protection against children?!
-SIXTH-
Information, Sir: what we do to avoid space-comets, they amplify to murderous thievery for raw information: to release it.
MIKE
(turns) You mean, they've lost their ability to dodge space-rocks?
GABE
Could be, Mike: Then they'd kill for tidbits of information.
MIKE
An inferior mentality? Gabe;- enslaved to a superior technology?
GABE
Comparable to children, Mike, they don't see us in charge.
MIKE
Run an adaptability-profile on the children. Thank you, all.
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Others exit; Mike, Gabe, remain.
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GABE
Mike, you were hard on TfNi: We lost her husband Tefen; and her boy is …
MIKE
(clips) And both she and Adam took hits: I'm focusing on this, Gabe.
GABE
You suspect Adam is their only, target?
MIKE
What do you think of Adam? Is he tractable for spacer living?
GABE
He excels at spatio-temporal relations; As bright as any of the children, in a hundred years: He's foresightful.
MIKE
You mean, self-involved,- could be projective, even useless.
GABE
Too soon to ascertain, Mike, and we'd continue to teach him.
MIKE
Not under duress: not here. Thank you, Mr. Gabriel.
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INT. SCIENCE-INFORMATION ROOM - MEDIUM LIT (LATER)
4 days to Earth. One glass-wall views a chrysalis terrarium pod; chrysalides sometimes passing, pause and look out.
Mike, Ra, PTAH, 1800-year-older-twin grandfather, withered smaller, study Earth Spectral Compu-maps: springtime North snow; equatorial IR evidences 4000-BC civilization on rivers, deltas, Nile, Ganges, Amazon, Mississippi; epochal shows tectonic drift, a seamount-continent west of Europe:
Iron spectrum: red-Earth lands dark; forests, sands pale.
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ATEM-RA
(a beat) Okay. Next.
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Chromium spectrum: here and there.
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MIKE
(a beat) Chromium reflectance spectrum.
ATEM-RA
(a beat) Okay … Next.
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Silver spectrum, including Africa's dry rivers.
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MIKE
(a beat) Silver reflectance spectrum,- looks specular along the rivers …
ATEM-RA
Good ….
PTAH
Malleable; Could command a premium.
ATEM-RA
(a beat) Okay … Next.
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Gold spectrum, including Africa's dry rivers.
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MIKE
(a beat) Gold reflectance,- also along the rivers, and out here in the desert.
PTAH
I, thought so … Ripe for picking ….
ATEM-RA
Malleable; Could command a premium.
PTAH
(bemused a beat) Next.
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Tungsten spectrum: here and there.
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MIKE
(a beat) Tungsten reflectance spectrum.
ATEM-RA
(a beat) Okay … Next.
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MIKE
(a beat) Zirconium reflectance.
PTAH
(a beat) Oh, Poo…. That's going to take us several millennia to extract.
ATEM-RA
(politically creative) Still, Maybe facile: We start local mankind picking-up the gold … then, add silver, copper and iron … Build great competing civilizations … and after they begin hoarding strategic metals we exchange our gold for the right to extract our 3-percent-96 … Return pure depleted … By time they figure it out, we're long gone ….
PTAH
(a beat at Ra, smiles) Ra, You're brilliant half the time.
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GABE
(defensive) Excuse me, Mike: TfNi's in trouble: She did it again: She's blaming herself.
MIKE
Did?- What?- What's troubling her?
GABE
(holds a broken Watcher) This is the third broken Watcher.
MIKE
Then she's fixed her blame on open-intelligence technology.
GABE
Under incursion-strikes, she'd better secure internal operations.
MIKE
Open-intelligence always ranks the highest respect for performance.
GABE
But, Mike, Open-intelligence also exposes individuals:-- Adam!
MIKE
Priorities, Gabe: Adam is not suited to spacer-living.
GABE
(a bit upset) The adaptability profile is relativistic grading, not absolutistic:- Don't be hard.
MIKE
You believe Adam is their target,- and he's consular lineage ….
GABE
(detects incongruity) They can't know that:- That's eight thousand years ago…!
MIKE
And, open-intelligence should have erased it among us.
GABE
Open-intelligence mollifies,- but can't subvert motherhood.
MIKE
Doesn't need-to:- It shows us what we must do promptly.
GABE
(yielding) … Finding a suitable space-refuge, for him, means we need a temperate planet similar to our former Earth.
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Live-Earth map: atmospheric gases absorption-spectra.
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MIKE
The target planet is a feasibility: We can put them down near the space seed implantation … (to Ra, Ptah) Excuse me, guys …
GABE
This is their solar system, Mike: They'll go after him down there.
MIKE
(admits but) Safer than with us … We'll have to put them down without the spacer habiliments.
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Ra, Ptah, chickle-chuckle.
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GABE
That's extremal … Should I go with them?
MIKE
A separated mother is more common among suicidal male cultures …. (resumes at map) Atmospheric composition parametrics are similar to a minim-suit plus a nitrogen burden, -useful for plant-life,- slightly deranging for men, animals,- but Adam will survive it.
GABE
(involved too) Nitrogen, matrix … Nitrogen Two…?- (chuckles) No heavy molecular oxidators?-- They're going to chirp like birds!- Not to mention feeling ill all day.
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Ra, Ptah, mutually mock-sick-burps, hands to lips.
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MIKE
(stifles a nod yes) Significant gravity, They will rest supine. Helium spectral absorption suggests underground gases and oil reserves in valleys and near seas:- eventually useful resources.…
GABE
This is severe … Have we any choice of ground location? Harvest-season?
MIKE
Take a look:- Infra-red especially.
GABE
(examines Earth-IR map) Appear to be several long rivers in luxuriant temperate zones,-- here … (points at major rivers)
MIKE
(at S Euphrates) Yes,- And this confluence of four plain-rivers in this mid-northern temperate zone … is target choice.
GABE
(at S Persian gulf) Gulf is constricted:- Northern top-water could be fresh ….
MIKE
Planet rotation on 24 degrees tilt: Usable day; Quadrature mild seasons favoring warm northern springtime….
GABE
Do you have nightside, infra-red: Is it populated?
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Mike switches map: black+red-enhanced night-views of Earth.
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MIKE
(sweeps down Euphrates) Northward is, but practically none southward.
GABE
Unsettling, Mike:- A spacer-ideal locale with no settlementation….
MIKE
It's drier; Fertile, but few trees for building … Maybe the ground is unstable for tall structures?
GABE
Maybe it silt-floods seasonally: There may be no exposed stones.
MIKE
(at eastward Karun R.) They can set-down on higher ground here in the foothills … There will be fewer trade-route travelers at the base of the eastern mountain-plateau range.
GABE
(summarizes hope) Polluted morons, spacer-profile-rejects, disillusioned political-losers: All manner of dangerous defilements and disloyalties: What can we provide them? We're hundred percent spacer-typed!
MIKE
Nothing, but the information of where they are: where they can go.
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Ptah leans subtly forward--
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PTAH
Tell him about the sunset beaches.
GABE
(grins at Ptah)
You've been dreaming again, Ptah: You've never seen a beach up-close.
PTAH
Dreams must count for something: If poops feed plants, Dreams respite …
GABE
(grin wears off to Mike) I'll prepare TfNi;- How soon do we arrive at… new-Earth?
MIKE
Four days: We decelerate-swing at its large moon, and arrive at the main planet nightside as the moon enters a solar-eclipse umbra.… (emotes unto chrysalides) I'll be glad to unload this space-seed cargo;- In dreams I smell its stench of rottage;-- I've tested for cracks: There are no leaks; It almost has me believing in extra sensory perceptions … or dreams.
GABE
This is profound, Mike: Where will we, go then-after?
MIKE
(points to N. Nile) Ptah and Ra are landing due-west …
GABE
Ooh, Nice.
MIKE
We, may have no choice, Gabe: We've got non-ballistics paralleling at tracking distance …. We'll drop our cargo, return to third synchronous orbit, and find the scout ship … We can watch over Earth day and night.
GABE
I'll shuttle them down at maximum angle just before orbit-dawn: With the lunar eclipse behind us, it'll give us all the best disguise into the changing terminator daylight.
MIKE
And then return directly:-- We may have to leave Earth-orbit entirely.
GABE
Mike, We have no agenda to abandon them forever.
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Venus-Solar map; Ptah, Ra, join interested.
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MIKE
I'm looking at this planet inward: Ample resources for us to reform;- Cloud cover and thermal inclemency should deter incursions.
GABE
(at sun-data chart) Billion-year sun-stability,- Good.
MIKE
Any further discussion? We remain on Yellow-Alert, henceforth.
GABE
Thanks … This will be a very long planetary exploration for TfNi. (turns, exits)
ATEM-RA
(to Ptah) Ptah, A sunset beach faces the west: That means you'll have to take the east, shore.
PTAH
We can share the river, And I'll come over with Sekhmet to your side for the evening sunsets.
ATEM-RA
(a beat bemused) Okay, That's amenable, I guess.
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INT. COMMAND - 4000 BC EARTH NIGHTSIDE - LIT (4 DAYS LATER)
Hyperbolic approach; CMDR Michael watches Display-enhanced nightside Atlantic ocean, African continent turning toward;
Gabe enters, carrying leaf-sack bundles on a vine garland:
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GABE
Mike: TfNi and Adam are ready to shuttle down.
MIKE
It'll have to be quick, Gabe: We have non-ballistics approaching within quick-strike range.
GABE
(subdued) And one other thing, Mike:-- TfNi has impregnated herself from the marrow in Adam's broken rib.…
MIKE
(acknowledges) That's fine, Gabe: Without her husband, she might as well … (looks askance)
GABE
She programmed for a girl.
MIKE
(deliberate smile) Figures: Good choice.
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Gabe motions: TfNi, Adam, enter without spacer-habiliments; indications of surgery: Adam, at a rib; TfNi, inner-thigh.
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GABE
(holds out leaf-bundles) Can they have these gene-adapted fertile-seed pouches? And rolled thatch-leaf mats?
MIKE
(peruses) Yes,-- those look Earth-ordinary.
GABE
(garlands TfNi, smiles) These seeds are bitter-coated with a dry fertilizer-primer.…
MIKE
(continuing) But, what about their rifle-scars? Can we cover that better?
GABE
Flesh accelerants leave uneven fill without persistent tending:- best not.
TFNI
(resolute) Commander Michael:- Are there any last instructions? Any idea who's upon us?
MIKE
None, TfNi, and I can't risk exposing you and Adam to find-out.
GABE
TfNi: We do know their speech is root-similar, with eight millennia of insular development …. Earth-technology languages could deviate by isolated millennia further;- We'll ask our century scouts.
TFNI
(turns to Adam) Adam, Are you ready to go explore a day-type-six planet?
ADAM
(looks at Gabe) Yes. (looks at TfNi) Is this how they dress?
MIKE
Yes: (looks at Gabe) They are fairly primitive mankind, (to Adam) among a variety of land-animals.
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ATEM-RA
(smiling pretence) Someone looking for me …?
TFNI
(bursts tears to hug) Ra…!
ATEM-RA
(hugging, patting) It'll be alright, dear: They've got spacepods out there looking for him … When we find him, he may be a few years recuperating on ice.
TFNI
(sobering) Can you, come down, and visit…?
ATEM-RA
(comforting, to a grin) Now young one: We've been away from planets a million years: An old god like me can't do much with gravity: If I sit on one corner of a planet, my head points north, and if I sit on the other corner, my head points south: It's very confusing for an old god like me …
TFNI
(giggles in tears) But … If you can, someday, we would love to have you visit …
ATEM-RA
I'll think about it: The gravity of thought eventually outweighs most …
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KLAXON doublet;-- Mike quick-checks status:
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[P.A.] (VO)
E-T-A: 3-87:-- Non-Ballistic Convergence!--
(CONCURRENT)
(countdown 2 per 2 sec.) E-T-A: 3-85 … E-T-A: 3-83 … (etc.)
TFNI
(attentive) We'd best get going … (to Adam) Say goodbye to your granddad, Adam.
ADAM
(to Atem-Ra) Good-Bye, Granddad Atem-Ra.
ATEM-RA
Good-Bye, young Adam Geb: You take good care of your mother TfNi….
ADAM
Yes, Granddad Atem.
ATEM-RA
(assures TfNi) I'll see you again somewhere, TfNi.
TFNI
Of course, Ra.…
GABE
(calm urgent to Mike) We'll leave now, with your order.
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Mike nods yes,- and resumes controls; They turn to leave.
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ATEM-RA
One other thing, TfNi, -should any ask:- You and Adam will be the gods of the wind and the earth;- I'll be the Sun-god; Ptah is Grand Creator: We agreed.… Thoth is still figuring one out: He wants to be the god of technicolor flowers … and wife Maat wants bird feathers … We're trying to convince him, to be something more substantial,- like moon-god.
TFNI
I'm the god, of the wind?
ATEM-RA
God, -goddess,- … till we recover Tefen and send him down. If you make a change, keep it consistent in the places you have been.
GABE
Did you pick one for me, Ra?
ATEM-RA
Ah!- We forgot all about you, Gabe … Just tell them you're one of the gods' messengers: an archangel. (to Mike) Same, anytime any of you visit.…
GABE
Okay … But I'm going to relocate to one of Ptah's sunset-dream-beaches.
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Gabe, TfNi, Adam, leaving Mike, Ra, mutually grinning …
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ATEM-RA
(calling after) And say goodbye to Ptah … He's in the Trampoline Room ….
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INT. HALL - TO TRAMPOLINE ROOM - LIT (CONTINUOUS)
Hurrying along …
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TFNI
What's Ptah doing in the Trampoline Room one hour before planet impact?
GABE
Oh, You know Ptah,- always creating some new invention:- He says he has a new way to prepare for gravity.
TFNI
I thought the centrifuge exerciser…
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EXT. TRAMPOLINE ROOM - LIT (CONTINUOUS)
Ptah is bouncing in a translucent enclosed spring-slung web-sack trampoline …
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TFNI
(watches 3 bounces) Bye, Ptah!
PTAH
(between bounces) Bye, TfNi … See you … down below! … (a beat) How many … is that … now?
SEKMET (OS)
One thousand, one hundred, ninety-two, half-bounces ….
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They hurry on; Ptah's twin wife SEKMET has been monitoring:
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PTAH
Sekmet … What is … half … a bounce?
SEKMET
From the middle of the sack to the farthest stretch,- or back again: I count those directly ….
PTAH
Okay, Dear … Half, bounces …
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